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Research more... you had good voice but but enough information. Other than that this was a good blog.
ReplyDeleteI liked that you did put in your opinion but you shouldn't so much opinion that the reader won't even get to decide about their own opinion. Other than that this was amazing!
ReplyDeleteI cant see the text propoly with the background but good help with my homework!
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